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Same philosophies extend to instructional coaching. It's about clarity of intention, reflection, and ownership. Working side by side. Building communities of learners (of all ages).



Sunday, March 4, 2018

#SOL18 Day 4


A family of
Deer
Gathering.
All the sound in the world
Disappears
As they move closer across
Winter grass
In and out of sunlight
Filtered through evergreen trees.

A little one stares—
No wildness in her eyes.
Ears cup mountain air
Swivel
Soft inside
Listening for a sound that won’t come from me.


I lean low on the railing,
Making eye contact with the watchful one.
I am a visitor
In their neighborhood today.



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5 comments:

  1. RitaMarch 4, 2018 at 2:47 PM

    Love that you have a picture to go with your poem. You capture that moment beautifully. I love when the deer make an appearance on my way to work in the morning.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 4, 2018 at 2:50 PM

    The quiet, still interaction between you and the watchful one is a beautiful picture. Thank you for sharing your moment!

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  3. MorganMarch 4, 2018 at 6:10 PM

    I am intrigued by your use of black and grey and wonder if it has something to do with the line "In and out of sunlight." ? You do capture the serenity of these moments and stretch them out to fill this day.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 4, 2018 at 8:01 PM

    What a beautiful poem and observation.

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  5. AndreaMarch 4, 2018 at 9:05 PM

    This quiet slice makes me think about the deer that I see on my runs in my neighborhoods. I like this sentence: "I am a visitor
    In their neighborhood today. " A good reminder to all of us as we encounter the world around us.

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